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death to the zombies ch. 1 the out break
I woke up this morning to see a man at my window as if he just got there. there was blood rolling down his cheek so I got up to see if he was all-right. As I neared the window he threw himself into my room. I ran back a step and grabbed the gun from my drawer I knew it was a zombie then. It leaped towords me as I backed up it missed and I shot it in its head. I sat down to recouperate. It bleed for awhile. As I gathered my wepons, short sword, pistol, rifel, shotgun, and longword I left my house. I headed for the rutters. It had a supply of food and a room with no windows and one door to the store prety safe. I also brought some wood. as I near the store I see zombies crowding around it I shoot the gass pumps at a safe distance and ran. Why were they crowding around the store. I get in to my room and find a woman and another man! to be continued... signed |
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uhhhhhh.........mixed emotions going through me right now. sadness, a little anger(very little) a little bit annoyed and some what a little happy. Why you may ask, well
1. That was a paragraph long, i can understand if its an exert from another story, but it says chapter 1 so, a little disapointed that it wasn't longer.
2. Spelling Errors: i noticed that even though it was short, it had a lot of spelling errors and at some parts, they just didn't make any sense.
But dont let these remarks stop you from continuing your story writing. Build off of what i have writin down and you will eventual become very good at it
thanks for the tip and yes wait no I can't spell. and I'm not good with long stories but I put in a lot of story in all so I will try chapter 2 (or since its chort call it what you want and what didn't make sense
and how do you do that thing that people do like an expert
i'm sorry, what? i dont recall putting anything about an expert. maybe you thought exert ment expert. exert means taking something out of a book and using it to desribe, or use something
oh sorry mindlaps (can't spell that word either) I know how to spell that but didnt... well you know I don't cheak my posts throught yeah that's it sorry again