actually hamburglar,it is spelled perfectly fine just some of the grammar isnt that great but i was tired when i decided to write it but im wanting to remove it from the site because its a horrible piece of writing in my mind,I really should just stick to poetry....
Submitted by NWAZM on Wed, 04/04/2007 - 22:11.
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Dude, spell-check for Christ's sake, I can barely read the thing.
haha its weird i can actually visualize this easily in my head. i guess thats the advantage of living where the story is based in.
actually hamburglar,it is spelled perfectly fine just some of the grammar isnt that great but i was tired when i decided to write it but im wanting to remove it from the site because its a horrible piece of writing in my mind,I really should just stick to poetry....